Are these good lyrics?

i realize i cant put the music for it on here, but i can post the lyrics. just realize, im only 12



Forget me not

Love me lots

We shared the tears



Forget what i said

Where was my head

All those years?



If I could take back what I did

When I was just a stupid kid

I could have said what i want to now



For get me not

Love me lots

Hold my had forever

never leave and never ever

say goodbye

i want you hear with me





and it goes on

wat do u think?

i realize it makes little sense without the music to go with it (i would post it if it was possible) but i just want to no wat u think of the lyrics



oh and btw its about a parent dying and someone regreting not being able to make up with them

Are these good lyrics?
tht is really good like most of the time I thought you were talking about a boyfriend...and at the end....it gets really jumbled...but I really like this and I would like tottally buy a whole cd..if it just had this one song. as long as the music is ok and gos along with it.
Reply:Forget me not

Love me lots



-Sure it rhymes but it just doesn't flow to be sung outloud.



If I could take back what I did

When I was just a stupid kid

I could have said what i want to now



- Sing it ouloud with a slow tempo and it is really good.
Reply:It's actually pretty good. Especially to be only 12.