Friday, January 6, 2012

What do you think of this poem?

Forget-me-not by Lanette Lusk



We are the bulbs you may plant in spring

We are the sound when you hear the birds sing

We are the ones that could not cry

We are the ones he chose to die



Our tears are the tips of the morning dew

We are the ones that you never knew

We are the rain that's left on the grass

The test for life we did not pass



We are the bees you hear and hum

We had no voice to call you mum

We are the forest that fragrance the wood

To be with you if only we could



We are the sun, the clouds, the moon

We are the blooms that went too soon

We are the stars that shine above

We are the ones you could not love

What do you think of this poem?
t think it is a beautiful poem t have the same poem in a card i bought at rite aid last week
Reply:I love it! It's a great poem. Great Work! I wish I could write that good. Keep up the good work.
Reply:I write poem to here is one.



Dreams



I'm dream in the morning i dream in school i dream everywhere i go love and hope is in my dreams no matter where i go i sing in my dream and i have 99999999 dollars all in my dream when my teacher gets boring i start to fall asleep then i drift into dream land.the end.keep up the good dreaming with poems


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